VH1 Pickup Artist 2 Casting

It seems my video didn't get the sound just right. So here's what I said:
Hello everyone, I'm Richard and this is my second video. First I want to clairify the video from yesterday. I had a really bad day and the depression somehow worked it's way into the video. Now I will tell you more about me. I said I was a professional. Actually I'm in medicine specifically an LMT. If you don't know what that is, look it up. I also have aspirations of becoming a doctor. Why is that important? Because anyone in medicine is attractive to women. And in this competition I want to say that, Mystery, I have actually read and studied your book along with the Game. I didn't like Neil's book as much though. Just a bit too Socratic for me. It's just personal preference. I want in this competition to become a master before a master can be crowned. I want people to look at me and say, "That's how it should be done." At the end I want to be your equal.
Thank you.
So if you are having a hard time hearing my second video just read this.